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Critiquing

Wed Jun 21, 2006, 7:19 PM
Sadness..weCritique just closed its doors. Funny, I thought there were more critics out there than writers. Just goes to show. I guess it takes more effort to read a piece and then analyze it. I admit, I can only critique when I'm in the mood. But, hey - what the hell!

I'm going to offer anyone who wants one, critiques on pieces of written work (prose or poetry). I'm a pretty good critic when I get my ass into gear.

I'll be using a pretty basic critique template.

1. What I think the piece is about.
2. Things I liked in the piece.
3. Things I think could be improved.
4. Specific changes.

Within the workshopping groups I've been in, this is a pretty simple and easy way to give a clear and concise critique. Well, I guess that's all. If you want a piece critiqued, just comment with the link!

My Best,
Susan

  • Mood: aahh!
  • Reading: Fahrenheit 451

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  • Current Residence: Brisbane, Australia
  • Interests: writing, reading, singing, ballroom dancing, otters, cricket, music, photography, marketing
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:icontusio:
hey, thank you very much for :+fav: :hug:

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Thanks for the watch! :)
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thanks for the visit

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Thankyou so much for the +fav: and the comment! :hug:

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:iconhoreb:
:w00t: hey, thanks for the watch and also the comment on "daydreams". Can't tell you how much I appreciate that. :D Sorry about the misunderstanding on the comments tho(the :+fav: thingie) . It's time for me to catch up with sleep I think before I start rambling off something silly again. Thanks again.
:iconxx3ddfan:
Oh okay... well I'll fix chapter one's title later. I think the paragraphs are fine and long enough, so I'm keeping them.

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