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Susie Q  

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Idyll

It is a hot humid night; I am on my way to a party where I am about to fall in love. Not that I know this or intend it. It is by sheer dumb luck I’m here, never having travelled in the right circles to warrant this kind of invitation. My face shifts underneath blush, gloss, foundation and an overzealous application of eye shadow. The perfume reminds me of someone else – someone prettier and better prepared for such an event.     
Hamilton - the playground for the rich and richer – winds passed me. Too fast to take in yet too slow to forget, I am being snubbed by a suburb. On the right is the river. Night hides the dull bro

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Critiquing

Journal Entry: Wed Jun 21, 2006, 8:19 PM
Sadness..weCritique just closed its doors. Funny, I thought there were more critics out there than writers. Just goes to show. I guess it takes more effort to read a piece and then analyze it. I admit, I can only critique when I'm in the mood. But, hey - what the hell!

I'm going to offer anyone who wants one, critiques on pieces of written work (prose or poetry). I'm a pretty good critic when I get my ass into gear.

I'll be using a pretty basic critique template.

1. What I think the piece is about.
2. Things I liked in the piece.
3. Things I think could be improved.
4. Specific changes.

Within the workshopping groups I've been in, this is a pretty simple and easy way to give a clear and concise critique. Well, I guess that's all. If you want a piece critiqued, just comment with the link!

My Best,
Susan

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  • Mood: aahh!
  • Reading: Fahrenheit 451

Devious Information

  • Current Age: 19
  • Current Residence: Brisbane, Australia
  • Interests: writing, reading, singing, ballroom dancing, otters, cricket, music, photography, marketing
  • Favourite movie: The Shawshank Redemption
  • Favourite band or musician: Explosions in the Sky
  • Favourite genre of music: everything
  • Favourite poet or writer: Charles Bukowski
  • MP3 player of choice: ipod
  • Wallpaper of choice: ffx - the kiss
  • Favourite cartoon character: snoopy
  • Personal Quote: i like my life to be a battle - showering, eating, sleeping...
  • Tools of the Trade: pen, notebook, laptop

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~tusio:icontusio: Apr 18, 2007, 11:38:30 AM
hey, thank you very much for :+fav: :hug:

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~lianaigreentea:iconlianaigreentea: Jul 11, 2006, 9:18:06 AM
Thanks for the watch! :)
*Baby-Blue-Eyes:iconBaby-Blue-Eyes: Jun 18, 2006, 6:28:49 AM
thanks for the visit

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To be brave is to love someone unconditionally, without expecting anything in return. To just give. That takes courage, because we don't want to fall on our faces or leave ourselves open to hurt.
~frankieofthehills:iconfrankieofthehills: Jun 11, 2006, 5:55:23 AM
Thankyou so much for the +fav: and the comment! :hug:

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"Should we be worried about the kids in the audience?"
"Naah! This is culture."
-Rizzo and Gonzo, A Muppet's Christmas Carol

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~horeb:iconhoreb: Jun 8, 2006, 6:17:49 PM
:w00t: hey, thanks for the watch and also the comment on "daydreams". Can't tell you how much I appreciate that. :D Sorry about the misunderstanding on the comments tho(the :+fav: thingie) . It's time for me to catch up with sleep I think before I start rambling off something silly again. Thanks again.
~xx3DDFan:iconxx3DDFan: Jun 5, 2006, 7:30:35 PM
Oh okay... well I'll fix chapter one's title later. I think the paragraphs are fine and long enough, so I'm keeping them.
~CJWolf:iconCJWolf: May 21, 2006, 4:03:38 AM
Thankies for the watch *hugs and watches back*
~dylanjones:icondylanjones: May 18, 2006, 9:39:12 PM
Hey oh!

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-Dylan Jones
~Venugopalan:iconVenugopalan: Apr 30, 2006, 11:34:42 AM
Thanks for the :+fav:! Much appreciated :D
~DragonPalladin:iconDragonPalladin: Apr 18, 2006, 7:02:28 AM
:giggle: your so nice :hug:

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You say insane, I say unique :D
~snoozie-q:iconsnoozie-q: Apr 17, 2006, 10:11:49 PM
thanks ^_^ and no probs.

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In my mind, she was already naked.
~DragonPalladin:iconDragonPalladin: Apr 17, 2006, 9:34:55 PM
thank you for adding me friends! I think you are sooooo pretty!

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You say insane, I say unique :D
*homicidal-mistress:iconhomicidal-mistress: Apr 3, 2006, 4:53:22 AM
lol thanx. Not true- but thanx.

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---[[ImmortalMissy]]---


Lo que es no es lo que debería haber sido
~snoozie-q:iconsnoozie-q: Apr 3, 2006, 4:27:51 AM
no probs, you take some awesome photos

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In my mind, she was already naked.
*homicidal-mistress:iconhomicidal-mistress: Apr 2, 2006, 11:53:43 PM
thanx for the faves hon

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Lo que es no es lo que debería haber sido
*homicidal-mistress:iconhomicidal-mistress: Apr 1, 2006, 6:20:11 AM
oh, thank you for the watch :)

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---[[ImmortalMissy]]---


Lo que es no es lo que debería haber sido
~missy-star:iconmissy-star: Mar 26, 2006, 11:41:58 PM
thankyou for the watch :cuddle:

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******don’t let the words bite******
~DUNCANbradshaw:iconDUNCANbradshaw: Dec 24, 2005, 5:59:04 AM
hehe...a nintendog...that's cool

work...that's not cool...

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ph33r t3h w0lf13z!
~Sphinx-:iconSphinx-: Dec 23, 2005, 8:01:11 AM
Yay!
Thank you so much for the watch!
:hug:

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=kuroineko:iconkuroineko: Dec 22, 2005, 10:53:02 PM
Thanks for the fave. :3

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You Wouldn't Get It.
~snoozie-q:iconsnoozie-q: Dec 22, 2005, 6:32:09 AM
took me while to figure out who you were. jaff and i adopted a nintendog ^_^ bahhh have to work tomorrow from 7am

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In my mind, she was already naked.
~DUNCANbradshaw:iconDUNCANbradshaw: Dec 22, 2005, 5:46:49 AM
It's you! Welcome to dA! ^_~

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ph33r t3h w0lf13z!
~Shalora:iconShalora: Dec 21, 2005, 3:15:40 PM
Thank you so very much for the :+devwatch: and the :+fav:!! :hug:

Have a wonderful day,
Christine

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That was the day birds fell from the sky...
*Shalora
!Darthy-Fans:iconDarthy-Fans: Dec 21, 2005, 6:30:37 AM
Hey There :)

Thanks so much for the Friends add :D
I don't get into this account too often, but feel free to have a look at my photography and art accounts :) =darthmarlan and =Darthy-Art as well as my other stock account ~darthmarlan-stock

Hope you're having a nice week :D
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